#BlaPoWriMo: Too Close (poem)

December’s wind gusts
into winter. She clutches
Michael Kors handbag,

pale knuckles pressing
through white skin. She peeks over
her right shoulder, spins

around. You live here?
This your apartment?
she cries.
Yes. I point. Upstairs.

Purse held tightly to
her side, she lets me pass—
Maybe I followed

too close.

—Nortina


While I’m bummed my Panthers lost the Super Bowl, I still wanted to share my “incident” poem from yesterday’s BlaPoWriMo prompt. This actually happened to me back in college while I was walking home from the bus stop. I spent the rest of that afternoon wondering if I looked so scary that my neighbor (whom I’m sure had seen me before) would suspect me of potentially purse snatching. Was my afro too big that day? My jeans to loose? The music from my ear buds too loud? My face too mean?

If anyone else wants to join in, this challenge isn’t just for me! Check out my February is Black Poetry Writing Month post! I’ve pinged all the prompts to that page. You can write to the prompt, or submit your own poem. Just don’t forget to tag it BlaPoWriMo so I can find you! ๐Ÿ™‚

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19 thoughts on “#BlaPoWriMo: Too Close (poem)

  1. Oh man.
    Last winter, my husband and I walked an apple cobbler over to our neighbor. We wore the (dangerous) hoodies I mentioned in my recent comment.
    My black neighbor hollered at us, asked us who we were, what we were doing. He didn’t recognize us, lol — he said, “I never see you without your dog!” There’s a very specific group in my neighborhood and if you don’t belong, someone will call you out and threaten to call the cops because you don’t have business here.
    In our case, it’s not racially (or hoodie) driven, but then, we’re a diverse group. We’d be alright with little green men on our street, so long as they mow the yard and don’t run anyone’s kids over! ๐Ÿ˜›

    Your fro is adorable. I am not afraid of hair. lol

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    1. Thanks! I get self-conscious about it sometimes, so it’s always nice to hear love for the afro power. Lol.
      I guess it’s only human for us to be suspicious of people we don’t immediately recognize. It’s still unsettling though. Me? A criminal? I’m too cute! haha!
      My neighborhood is full of elderly black people who are suspicious of EVERYTHING — green men, hoodies, expensive cars. We used to call my neighbor across the street 2 Wants to Know (it’s a segment on our local news channel 2). She’d call the cops on your dog if it was lurking around the neighborhood. ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. Haha! On the one hand, I think it’s good and cuts down on crime, but on the other hand, there seems to be a fine line on busybody behavior!
        I feel just like you do. I look like anyone’s mom, how can I possibly seem threatening?!? Some people are twitchy, I reckon.

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  2. Great poem and love the story with it ๐Ÿ™‚ Would love to see a picture of you with a afro, LOL! Yes, I wanted the Panthers to win, not because I really care about football, sorry! But just cause I wanted to laugh at my friends who were Bronco fans! LOL! I know, so nice of me!

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    1. Sorry Joy! My sharing settings are really weird. I’ve always had it set to show the reblog button on all my posts, but for some reason I had to check everything else to make sure it actually showed up. Funny how I never noticed that until now. I honestly don’t know how anyone else has been able to reblog my posts. Lol. The reblog button should be there now!

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      1. I was able to reblog it with the WordPress button (Press This) but it Reblogged it with the poem at the top and the wording at the bottom. It looked like it had left off the wording at the top, but I don’t think it did. I think it put it at the bottom. ??

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      2. Kind of weird, but hey, it worked, so I won’t complain. Thanks for the reblog! ๐Ÿ™‚ I’ll try to make sure the button is visible on my posts from now on. I’m still not sure why it wasn’t before. I’ll just have to blame WordPress and all its unnecessary updates. Haha!

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