I watched the vulture looking at me hungrily as I lay on the ground bleeding and injured.
She’d missed my head, possibly losing her nerve; or maybe a small part of her cold, black heart still skipped a beat for me, causing her to shift the gun slightly to the right before pulling the trigger.
The passion we’d shared for one another once burned hotter than the flames of a forest fire. I remembered her electrified kisses, how they sent sparks down my spine. I could still feel her warm, naked body against mine as I held her for the last time. Before she opened my laptop to look for movie times. Before she saw the pictures of perky breasts, the videos of bouncing, bare bottoms.
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My numbing hand is too weak to stop the blood flow gushing from my neck. They say the last place you look before you die is the sky, but I don’t want to see the vulture when it spreads its wings.
word count: 150
—Nortina
I understand serials are frustrating for some bloggers, but this opening line for Mondays Finish the Story was begging me continue on from last week’s post. If it’s any consolation, you really don’t need to read part 1 to get the story. 🙂
Hell hath no fury…. LOL! Revenge is sweet and now the vulture will eat from his rotting bones. Wonderful story Nortina!
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That is some kind of way to die! Thanks, PJ!
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well done
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Nice read
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She was really possessive. And she did not do you much of a favor by shooting you in the neck. Good story for such a few words!
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Basically just traded an immediate death for a slow and agonizing one. And yes, girl’s definitely got some issues to iron out. Thanks for reading! 🙂
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What happened at the movies? Lol…
All jokes aside, great story!
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Thanks! My idea was that they had plans to go to the movies, but when she got on his laptop to look up showtimes, she found his porn collection instead. I might have been indirectly inspired by an episode of Snapped! Haha!
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so funny!
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