Fixing Disney Plot Holes

Few knew about the castle hidden inside the island…

“That’s what you’re starting with?” Allie asked.

“It’s the only way it makes sense!” Jason said. “How is there a castle a couple miles up the road and the villagers know nothing about it? What is he a prince of? The water?”

“The bigger question is what kind of beautiful fairy curses an eleven-year-old boy?”

“And where were his parents?”

“And do they really expect us to believe Chip is Mrs. Potts’ kid? She’s like twenty years post-menopausal!”

“I bet he’s really Lumiere’s kid.”

“With that duster, French maid?” Allie nodded. “Mrs. Potts probably just took him in so the girl wouldn’t look like a slut.”

Jason typed frantically, his fingers like spider legs crawling across the keyboard. “Do you think a producer would buy this movie?”

“Are you kidding? Beauty and the Beast with a twist? They re-did Sleeping Beauty, Snow White. Why not this one?”

word count: 147

—Nortina


Mondays Finish the Story: a flash fiction challenge where we provide you with a new photo each week, and the first sentence of a story. Your challenge is to finish the story using 100-150 words, not including the sentence provided.

Click the froggy icon to read other stories and add your own.

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31 thoughts on “Fixing Disney Plot Holes

    1. Lol. When I saw the photo and opening line, it just screamed Beauty and the Beast and all its wonderful plot holes Disney hoped we wouldn’t notice. Maybe not as kids, but those kids grow up, Disney! They grow up! 😀

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