I Said No Pickles, Stupid

July 29, 2015 ~ Nortina S.

“I don’t deserve this.”

She stabbed her thumb ripping out her nametag, pulled apart the loose Velcro, slammed her hat onto the counter, and shook out her matted hair.

“You think you can live off minimum wage? Make your own fucking burger!”

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9 thoughts on “I Said No Pickles, Stupid”

Kalpana solsi says:

July 30, 2015 at 5:19 am

Loved the attitude. Keep it up.

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innatejames says:

July 29, 2015 at 10:12 pm

I like how you worked your title into the plot and it works without it too! Not easy and you pulled it off masterfully.

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1. Nortina S. says:
  
  July 30, 2015 at 11:29 am
  
  Thanks!
  
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anusrini20 says:

July 29, 2015 at 2:13 pm

Strong! I was able to imagine all the sounds and images!

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HumaAq says:

July 29, 2015 at 2:07 pm

A good strong story in few words. You did good

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1. Nortina S. says:
  
  July 29, 2015 at 2:08 pm
  
  Thanks!
  
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Ruby Manchanda says:

July 29, 2015 at 1:38 pm

Job dissatisfaction. So relatable.

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kathy29156 says:

July 29, 2015 at 1:14 pm

You captured the scene and the mood perfectly! ♥

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1. Nortina S. says:
  
  July 29, 2015 at 1:37 pm
  
  Thanks! 🙂
  
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