I often wondered why they named the sex shop Adam and Eve. Dildos, cock rings, blow-up dolls, pornography—not very biblical to me. I doubt their customers are even married. Probably horny teenagers and 40-year-old, masturbating virgins.
Then I made love to my neighbor’s college dropout son in his backyard—rain from the previous night’s shower dripping off the plants, kissing my backside. It was only then, as we hid behind the leaves listening to his father stomp through the garden, calling, “Where are you?” that I realized how stimulated I was by the story of man’s first sinners.
word count: 99
—Nortina
It’s amazing how I manage to cut these stories down to 100 words (or less) every week. I’m such a wordy girl. 😉
Friday Fictioneers is a weekly challenge where you must write a story in 100 words or less using the provided photo prompt as inspiration. Click the froggy icon to ready other stories and add your own.
his name must be adam? i’d believe it if her name happened to be eve. nice story. 🙂
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Naughty Nortie, well done! Tay.
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Lol! Thanks. Naughty is so fun 😉
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This is a brilliant awakening of a Naive. And such a great take on the prompt. Great fun.
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Loved it. Matter of fact, plain spoken. Well done.
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Thanks! 🙂
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Those are the best ones, the stories that hit you from nowhere 😀
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I guess when you don’t have a fig leaf, any leaf will do! Interesting take on this photo.
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I really like this. Creative – it’s lovely to read something different on FF and well written too.
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Thanks. I went outside the box and across the street with this one. 😀
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You may be a wordy girl, but you cut to the chase.
A hot damn chase…
Great job. (You have a way with and without words!)
Randy
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Thanks! My knife is definitely sharper thanks to these weekly writing challenges. 😀
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Very imaginative Nortina! LOL! Now I know where your mind has been lately. 😀 😀 *Just kidding* sorta
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Haha! I’ll be honest, my mind has been in the gutter a lot lately 😀
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LOL!!
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Very creative use of the prompt!
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Oh I think this is perfect..such great surprise.
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Dear Nortina,
I certainly don’t say this often and usually not a story of this ilk, but it’s brilliant.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks! This one was definitely outside the box!
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This is quite a story, and a creative take on the prompt!
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Thanks! I was this close to writing a story about a dog drinking water off leaves. How I got to Adam and Eve will forever remain a mystery!
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If sex is a sin then so is life. Religions are created to control.
Good piece Nortina.
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