Aftermath

“What did you see?” the police officer asked, scribbling into his notepad.

“I used to joke about suicide. I would say, ‘If there’s no convincing you out of it, go ahead and kill yourself. Just don’t take the rest of us with you.’ I recognize how insensitive I was being, now.” I turned my head away as the paramedics wheeled the body on the stretcher passed me.

“So you didn’t see anyone push her?”

“I wish someone had. A girl that young. What would drive her to jump in front of a speeding train like that?”

“Your guess is as good as mine ma’am.”

“I can only hope she found peace.”

“Some witnesses say they saw her sleeping on the bench. When she jumped, her eyes were still closed.”

“A death as violent as being run over by a train. I pray she was still asleep. I pray she was having dreams of paradise and didn’t feel a thing.”

word count: 159

—Nortina


This week’s photo was too much of a coincidence for me not to give you guys a part two to last week’s installment. I hope you enjoyed!

Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers is a weekly challenge where you write a story in 100-150 words (give or take 25 words) using the provided photo prompt as inspiration.

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24 thoughts on “Aftermath

      1. It is ironic. When I say those things about a story that has death, or anything I consider bad, I say it for the writing and composition of the piece. I would hate to say, this story is bad. LOL, only because the ending is not a happy one. Your writing and composition was very good. Guess I’ll say it that way next time.

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      2. Oh, okay! I don’t want you to think I am some psycho. LOL! I love creepy, weird, horror, ect., but only because I know they are fiction. Haha! You are such an excellent writer, you can make even the “bad ending” posts into something great.

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